Writing Workshop – Evaluation Essay Writer: ______________________
Reader: ______________________
Directions: Work in small groups of three and read one group member’s paper. After you have read the paper all the way through, respond to the following questions on this sheet. You may also respond in the paper itself. Repeat the process with the other group member’s paper. By the end, each writer should receive two sheets of commentary. You must have a draft of your paper to participate in this workshop.
Does the essay make a purpose statement? If so, write it down in this space. If not, discuss and suggest what you think the purpose is.
Who is the intended Audience?
List at least 3 reasons for the judgment, and the supporting evidence for each.
Does the writer anticipate objections and alternative judgments? If so, write them down in this space. If not, discuss and write down suggestions of objections and alternative judgments.
What is the essay’s biggest strength? [presents the subject, asserts an overall judgment, gives reasons and support, anticipates objections and alternative judgments] Be specific – point to an example in the paper.
What questions has the writer not answered for you? Are there sections that are unclear, confusing, or vague?
Does the paper have a beginning, middle and end? Is there an obvious thesis statement? Write down some suggestions for improving the structure of the paper.
Identify any major proofreading problem areas by underlining or highlighting them on the paper. List a couple of recurring problems for the writer here. Do not spend an inordinate amount of time on grammar/mechanics.